Writing Assignment #6, Draft 1

Allegory of the Slave

Once a long time ago, in a land of golden fields and dark forests, lived Kip. Kip was a gnome, a little less than three and a half feet tall, with flaming red hair and a rather large nose. He lived in a small village at the base of the Crooked Mountains, with his wife and children. His people lived a peaceful and pastoral life in their small town, harvesting crops and, for leisure, digging up opals the size of chicken eggs in the soft, crumbly soil. They were content to live in harmony with nature, working their own trades and having great feasts celebrating the seasons. Kip was no exception, and loved nothing better than to sit in the Flying Squirrel (the local tavern) , and drink a pint of berry mead. Occasionally, the gnomes would venture out of their community, and go visit other gnome towns, to visit relatives or to trade the opals for which their county was famous for. But mostly they stayed at home, telling stories around the fire and having full moon dances.
It all changed the day the stranger came into town. On a dewy morning in early spring, when the pear trees were in bloom and the forest was alive with the chirping of baby birds, a man swaddled in rough black silk and carrying a pack swaggered into town. The gnomes were terrified because this man was a giant! He was at least five feet tall, with curly green hair and a vicious, charming grin,. He introduced himself to Kip and the rest of the gnomes who had tentatively gathered in the town square, as Mir the Trader. He told the alarmed gnomes that he had heard of their opals, and wanted to know if he could trade some of his silk for the stones. The villagers were awestruck at the cascades of glowing cloth in shades of peacock blue and sunset pink, and eagerly swapped a few gems for the material. Mir’s pale eyes widened in greed when he saw the smooth opals glittering in the gnome’s callused hands. He went on his way just as the day was drawing to a close, his sack bulging with his new treasure. That night, in the Flying Squirrel, Kip asked his friends if they had trusted the giant. The gnomes all agreed that he was jovial enough, and besides they had far too many opals anyway, and their wives and daughters were thrilled at the prospect of new pinafores and petticoats. Kip was silent with worry, : he had seen the flare of avarice in the merchant’s eyes, and remembered the cruel twist of his smile.
In time, the gnomes forgot the visitor, and both the memory of the man, and the silk petticoats faded. But on an evening in fall, when dusk was falling, Mir was seen again, riding on a monstrous beast, far larger than the goats that the gnomes kept. He was accompanied by a whole group of his people: tall, aloof, and carrying spears and swords that glinted in the rising moon. They gathered the trembling gnomes into the square, and informed them that they were now in charge of the village, and all of it’s opals. Mir’s grin was predatory as he spoke, “You savages are unfit to handle such valuable property of the kingdom. We’ve come to educate you, in a way. Your primitive rituals and idle days are over. You little midgets will mine for us now. Such small brains clearly cannot think for themselves, you obviously need guidance from people higher than you. If you protest or rebel, we shall make your lives more miserable than they already are.” The giants laughed as one, and the gnomes cowered in terror, clutching each other in panic. Kip bravely stepped up and cried out, “What right have you over us? You do not understand our lives, leave!”. Mir took out a dagger, and viciously slashed his cheek. The rest of the gnomes were mute in shock. Kip’s skin was permanently marked with two thin lines, scars that remained with him until he died.
And so it was that the giants enslaved the gnomes, forcing them with whips and blades to mine deep into the Crooked Mountains, and carry backbreaking loads of opals to their wagons, where they were thanked with a slap or an insult. Eventually the supply of opals ran out, and one day, the giants disappeared, leaving a town of ghostly slaves, who were once gnomes. Slowly, feebly, they tried to rebuild their lives, but oppression had crushed their spirits so that the mended town, and it’s inhabitants, were shadows of what they had been.